Sunday, September 18, 2011

Bracken - After The Fall

I've been working more on Bracken since I dropped her portrait and am once again at the stage where I'll let it sit to make sure there's nothing more I need to do to it.

As always, if anyone sees anything that need to be done or changed, please let me know!

3 comments:

Sue Clinker said...

That was quick Jan ... thought you were going to leave it for a few days :-)

The only think I would tweak if it were my painting is the dogs right eye (our left side). I tracked back and found the original ref picture on PMP and the eye, as you've depicted, is shadowed and dark but I personally would make the highlights just a tad brighter than the photo show.

Just my suggestion ... I'm about to start on an elderly Golden Retriever now (from not such good photo) :-(

Jan said...

I agree, Sue. I've looked and looked at that eye, measured, etc. but just couldn't figure out what was wrong. I'll try brightening the highlights - thanks so much!

Sadeu said...

very well paintings : )